Glen Eyrie Fiction Writer's Retreat

Sometimes we don’t even realize that our words sound negative, preachy, or don’t match the heart of the story and the target audience.  How do we spot what’s coming out in our tone and how can we go from where we started to a better way? We’ll look at what can happen in our tone (language that detracts from the writing, put-offs to the reader, and too many extra words) so that we can tune in and tighten up our writing in our tone to grab and hold the reader.  We’ll also look at how to stay encouraged in what you’re writing no matter what you hear from other writers or publishing professionals during your writing process.

If you’ve ever felt the burning desire to write from the depths of your spirit, to bleed your experiences onto the page, this workshop is your sanctuary of exploration and growth. Through guided exercises and introspective prompts, you’ll uncover the wealth of authentic material that resides within, waiting to be translated into words. Join us as we delve into the heart of fearless writing and create stories that resonate deeply with readers.

The clash between the real and the artificial is intensifying. It impacts every aspect of our lives and creativity. In this world of bright, shiny distractions, Allen Arnold offers a much-needed reality reorientation—a North Star that will transform our stories and help us pursue the real, defy the artificial, and risk our best for what matters most.

Talk may be cheap, but poor dialogue in your manuscript will cost you.  We’ll learn how to dump the dull stuff and sharpen your dialogue skills.  We’ll look at interior dialogue…one of the most effective tools we have to reveal character.  And we’ll look at some simple ways to strengthen our characterization.

At the heart of every major motion picture and timeless literary masterpiece lies a universal framework—one that effortlessly reflects our own desires, struggles, and aspirations. Join us as we delve into the intricacies of the Hero’s Journey framework, understanding why it forges deep bonds with readers and how to harness it to bring stories of joys, sorrows, and triumphs to life.

For many writers, telling others about their book or even asking them to purchase their book feels uncomfortable. How can you talk about your book without making it sound like it’s all about you? This workshop will help you feel more comfortable and give you genuine ways to talk about and market your book. We want to empower you to be able to share the felt need of your book to those who would read it so they instantly identify their interest. We’ll look at the approaches that don’t work so well and the ways that you can put into practice (with group participation in class!) so you can share your book with others effectively.